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Bob's avatar

Another nice read Erik! Well done indeed.

One small detail I'd maybe change is the 'get rid of the windscreen' - it left me a bit confused at first. Instead you could say something along the lines of 'replace their glass windscreens with a metal one (for safety? :D)

Just my €0,02

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Erik de Bos's avatar

Thanks, that makes sense - never thought about it like that! Will see how I can change it ;-)

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